Thursday, September 20, 2012

Responding to Responses

Responding to responses

            I really like Emile’s Reading response. He used a lot of advanced terminology in his writing. Another thing I like was that his writing was very clear and articulate. He gave great examples and really read in between the lines. He went deeply into his own opinions and I think it is a good thing to be opinionated when writing a reading response. He even went into a brief but detailed history about the topic at hand (Steve Jobs). He explained how interesting his life was and how he wasn’t afraid to say what he thought. I really thought this response was very clear and well written.

            I really liked the way Anas went into great detail on what his book was about before going into his response. It informed us (the readers). One thing I think he could have improved on is getting to the point it dragged on a bit too long. But many pieces of this response are great though. His introduction was great because he included everything that he had to. I thought he overall did a great job.

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